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    Default Sssssneaking Around [CAPTURE]

    Sssssneaking Around

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    SIMPLE
    Ekans
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    Why is something with no legs so good at moving???
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    Attempting to catch a Ekans!
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    as discussed, gonna leave the burmies alone for now.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gold View Post
    as discussed, gonna leave the burmies alone for now.

    GoldTopia GET
    I first saw this and thought of Kaa

    Then watched new Netflix adaptation, 12/10

    Now lets see if the Ekans is 12/10


    Things you did well:
    -Mouth and head shape are fantastic, really big fan of this interpretation of Ekans anatomy; like I said, I saw Kaa and some other realistic snake in this a lot, big fan
    -really nice to look at purple goes well with the greens and blues of the background, and I like the stone added for flavor
    -You included some shading! Huzzah! Whenever you do include shading it's always well done and really adds to the piece, super proud boyie am I.
    -the grass merging into Ekans' segment lines is really friggin nice, adds a lot of depth to the background and the subject


    Things you didn't do as well:
    -super simple background that's both abstract and definite seems a little all over the place; the rock has a lot of detail, but the flower on the right seems cartoonish and the tree behind seems static; would have wanted to see a bit more care put into the background, it gives your pieces so much more life when you do!
    -I think I've mentioned before, but try and either fill the blank space or crop it more to get a lot more mileage out of your pieces; this also helps with overall unity


    I think even smoothing and fleshing out the background more would have pushed this over Simple for me, but I'm going to leave it there for now. Have an Ekans, and usual hit me up if you have any questions!
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