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    Default A 5 oz. Bird Cannot Carry a 5 lb. Coconut!!! [CAPTURE]

    A 5 oz. Bird Cannot Carry a 5 lb. Coconut!!!

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    SIMPLE
    Taillow

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    Are you suggesting coconuts migrate?!?!?!?

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    Attempting to catch a taillow!


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    I claim dis in the name of Goldtopia
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    Quote Originally Posted by Gold View Post
    I claim dis in the name of Goldtopia
    Did you know I love Taillow?

    I hope my love for Taillow doesn't seem... Farfetch'd

    ANYWAYS


    Things you did well:
    -form/anatomy is spot on as usual, no real flaws here and I like the pose you've given Taillow.
    -coloring is well done, really breathes life into the Taillow.
    -shading and narrative well done, I like the inflight shot and the Monty Python reference


    Things you didn't do as well:
    -no background/other features, which is, as usual, fine in a simple piece but I've liked the backgrounds you've been attempting and even the addition of a coconut or something in the background would have been a fun addition.
    - feels empty with the white space both from the lack of background and the white portions of Taillow.
    -the small uncompleted line at the top of Taillow's wing is super distracting, even if I visually get what you were going for


    Overall, this is Fenris as usual; a really awesome form and well done piece with your now-signature marker. Enjoy your Taillow, captured and ready to carry coconuts.
    Abras are so cute!
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