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    Default Birb is the Word [CAPTURE]

    Birb is the Word


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    SIMPLE
    Pidgey


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    A-well-a ev'rybody's heard about the bird
    B-b-b-bird, b-birdd's a word
    A-well, a bird, bird, bird, bird is a word
    A-well, a bird, bird, bird, well-a bird is a word



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    Attempting to catch a Pidgey!
    [concise review pls]

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    Last edited by Fenris; 12-03-18 at 07:39 PM.


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    Concise Curation @ Birb is the Word
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    Target: Pidgey (Simple)
    Evaluation: Simple ★★
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    YEET
    Realistic take on Pidgey's anatomy; pudgy, rotund body-type similar to the pigeons we see in urban areas
    ✦ Very clean details such as the wings and the feathers on the head

    Sharp, crisp linework; outline on the subject does a great job of providing contrast
    Original composition, and natural looking posture and mannerism for a bird

    not so yeet...
    Faint, minimal shading
    Bare-bones background
    Pidgey has a two-tone coat (Brown & Beige); although you have the iconic eye mark, the body doesn't seem to exhibit the brown coloration that goes midway down the wings. =======================


    Really like the realism you've decided to add to Pidgey's image, and your work is always very clean. You showcase a good mastery of general fundamentals, but this piece is lacking a bit that would have bumped it up to Medium (fleshed out background, deeper values & detailed shading).


    You pass for Simple however, so congrats on your new Pidgey!
    Last edited by oribhel; 12-04-18 at 05:01 AM.

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