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    20180906 Ralts + Abra
    20180916 Murkrow
    20180927 Mawile
    20181107 Drilbur
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    Art Fourplay Ralts (Hard -> Med) + Abra (Complex -> Hard) Multi-capture
    Med Ralts (10k) + Hard Abra (20k) = Complex (30k)
    Grade Request: Concise



    Full Res: https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachmen...488/image0.png

    This is supposed to be Meteor Valley but the pond turned out really small sry ;;
    Last edited by oribhel; 11-07-18 at 04:56 PM.

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    Capture for Murkrow (Hard) @ Ruined Palace
    Grade Request; Concise
    I wanted to draw smth w the indigo & orange color scheme



    full res: https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/487019529692512267/507394645643362312/Murkrow.png
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    Capture for Mawile (Hard) @ Abandoned Powerplant
    Grade Request: Concise



    full res: https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachmen...026/mawile.png
    Last edited by oribhel; 11-07-18 at 04:53 PM.

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    Art Fourplay capture for Drilbur (Complex -> Hard)
    Grade request: Concise
    i need this boy too so quick doodle before this ends aaa



    full res: https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachmen...81/drilbur.png
    Last edited by oribhel; 11-07-18 at 04:53 PM.

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    Claiming Mawile

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    Successful:

    - Absolutely phenomenal use of color, shading, and highlights.
    - I particularly want to call out the unique lighting angle that leaves the back half of the picture in shadow, including part of Mawile.
    - The angle at which Beldum is drawn, combined with the fact that Mawile is positioned in the brightest part of the picture, almost makes it look like Beldum is shining the light on Mawile. I'm unsure if that was specifically intended, but it does naturally draw the viewer's eye in Mawile's direction, which is great composition.
    - Lots of great little details, like the girl's hair and complex shapes in Beldum's armor.

    Room for improvement:
    - While the girl's eyes are beautiful and vibrant, the bottom part of her face doesn't have much detail. Her mouth especially looks more like an emoji than a real mouth. The overall appearance is a flat field of color.
    - I think the composition could have been tightened up just a hair by bringing Mawile a little closer to the girl and Beldum. It felt like I had to move my eye just a bit too far to switch between looking at one or the other. I found my eye resting in the empty space between them a little too often.

    There's really not much else that could be improved in the context of a Hard ranked Pokemon. Therefore, Mawile is captured.

    Please let me know if you want to talk about any of the points I've brought up here!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Elrond View Post
    Successful:

    - Absolutely phenomenal use of color, shading, and highlights.
    - I particularly want to call out the unique lighting angle that leaves the back half of the picture in shadow, including part of Mawile.
    - The angle at which Beldum is drawn, combined with the fact that Mawile is positioned in the brightest part of the picture, almost makes it look like Beldum is shining the light on Mawile. I'm unsure if that was specifically intended, but it does naturally draw the viewer's eye in Mawile's direction, which is great composition.
    - Lots of great little details, like the girl's hair and complex shapes in Beldum's armor.

    Room for improvement:
    - While the girl's eyes are beautiful and vibrant, the bottom part of her face doesn't have much detail. Her mouth especially looks more like an emoji than a real mouth. The overall appearance is a flat field of color.
    - I think the composition could have been tightened up just a hair by bringing Mawile a little closer to the girl and Beldum. It felt like I had to move my eye just a bit too far to switch between looking at one or the other. I found my eye resting in the empty space between them a little too often.

    There's really not much else that could be improved in the context of a Hard ranked Pokemon. Therefore, Mawile is captured.

    Please let me know if you want to talk about any of the points I've brought up here!
    Thanks for curating as soon as the update got in!! Definitely see the space issue there, i liked the landscape orientation but my eyes move to the empty space as well... For the mouth I definitely do the triangle a lot lol, probably wasnt the best match for the composition tho. Claiming Mawile, thanks again!!
    Last edited by oribhel; 11-08-18 at 07:59 PM.

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    Hemlo I am claim Murkrow
    Abras are so cute!
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    Quote Originally Posted by oribhel View Post
    Art Fourplay Ralts (Hard -> Med) + Abra (Complex -> Hard) Multi-capture
    Med Ralts (10k) + Hard Abra (20k) = Complex (30k)
    Grade Request: Concise



    Full Res: https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachmen...488/image0.png

    This is supposed to be Meteor Valley but the pond turned out really small sry ;;
    Snapping this up in my Concise slot.

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