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    Curation @ Ignorance is Bliss
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    Target: Cutiefly (Simple)
    Evaluation: Simple ★★
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    YEET
    Interesting & unique composition idea
    Spot-on Cutiefly
    Easily identifiable storytelling
    Neat, clean colors & lines


    not so yeet...
    Lots of blank space left open / lack of background
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    I think this piece is really well drawn, just very empty, so I couldn't bump up to Medium ;; My only nitpicks with Cutiefly are that its eyes could be sparklier, and it's missing some fluffy stuff at the top! The flower is a key part of expressing the scene, but I don't think its enough to fill the page and count as a background. I think the light shading you've done here might be faint, but definitely isn't bad! Ultimately for this submission, we can see your skills in drawing the pokemon, but its very bare as a whole.


    Cutiefly is captured though! Take them hoooommmeeeeeeeee

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    clam i love cannibal

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    "Plants are People Too" submitting as capture attempt for an Oddish.


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    Curation @ Plants are People Too
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    Target: Oddish (Simple)
    Evaluation: Simple ★
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    YEET
    ✦ Amazing beautiful cannibalism; Pokemon ecology at its finest
    ✦ Two Oddish, both with great features & vibrant expressions
    ✦ Much deeper values in shading than before, good depth & shadow direction
    ✦ Straight forward storytelling as before
    playful and creative composition


    not so yeet...
    ✦ Small nitpick; canon Oddish has a larger leaves in its plant to body ratio
    ✦ Plain background / white space left over
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    Evan I love this piece just based on the savage way that Oddish is devouring its kin alone; but we also get to see you showcase much more fleshed out colors & shading than your Cutiefly submission. We see the shadows all following one light source coming from the upper left, and none of color messy out of line or so. It features two figures both in original poses as well, but with how empty the scene is as a whole I think it falls just a little bit short of Medium ;;

    Oddish is definitely captured! Looking forward to your future submissions since these were before the new overachiever reward system like you said! :ok_hand:

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